Hi Zudais Your story has some interesting detail about Jean Batten's travels and the record that she was trying to break. Please remember to edit your work prior to publishing, re-read it aloud, and check that you have included all of the correct punctuation in the right places.
Hi Zudais
ReplyDeleteYour story has some interesting detail about Jean Batten's travels and the record that she was trying to break.
Please remember to edit your work prior to publishing, re-read it aloud, and check that you have included all of the correct punctuation in the right places.
Kia ora sarah thanks for commenting and also thank you for giving some tips and I will remember to read my work aloud
ReplyDeleteThank you
Zudais out.